Off to the movie with my home girl wearing my jean mini skirt. When we arrived we bought our tickets and headed to go buy some snacks then headed into the theatre. Finding a nice quiet spot in the back we sat down chatting waiting for the movie to start. As the curtain opened and the lights went off we started to enjoy the movie.
A guy came in and sat down beside not thinking anything about him I start to feel his hand on my thigh. His hand travels up my skirt touching and rubbing my pussy that was covered by my panties. Leaning back I open my legs wider so he would have a little more room as he pulled my panties over to the side. Taking his finger and rubbing my clit I start to release my home made juices making my pussy wet. He inserted a finger in stroking my wet walls with one finger and flicking my clit with the other at the same time. I'm trying not to moan so my home girl wouldn't notice what was going on beside her. Faster he was flicking my little precious jewel between my pussy lips and stroking me harder with his finger.
Trying to catch my breath my juice starts to drizzle down between my thighs....feeling so damn good to me I won't lie. As I grab the arms of the chair and my kitty cat is hungry for more he adds another finger. Whispering in my ear asking me if I like what I feel I nod. Two fingers in and my clit is getting all the attention it needs I start to feel flush. I close my eyes enjoying the feel of his fingers fucking me. An hour has past my thighs tighten locking his hand in that sweet spot of mine. My pussy starts to quiver around his fingers as I come all over his hand.
I sit there and close my eyes taking a deep breath trying to get myself together. When the movie ended and the lights came on off he went never seeing his face. My home girl asked me how I liked the movie. I said..........
"It was good... it was damn good!"
A Hot Night At The Movies
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4671081
Author notes
Amber Roses
This is a collab. done with Jeremy0826 The link is bellow.
A Hot Night At The Movies
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4671081
The picture used with this write I do not claim as my own. Picture found on google images
In a list
A contest entry
- Take My Breath Away(Anything you Want) by fairytalelovestory.
675 points, ended October 19, 2008, 106 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - sensuel, sexsual,Erotic by lonelyboy.
880 points, ended January 17, 19 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I came here from Jeremy's poem, and O la la... hehe next time I wanna go to the movies with ya'll 
hehehe This was amazingly HOT! Great write! I love how this collab was written!
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This is brilliant work! Truly magnificent work and I can see why it won. I was pulled inside as if I was standing there watching it all unfold. Truly amazing and I can see the strict hard dedication to every single word you chose. Well done!
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SO THAT WAS YOU WITH THE NICE JUICY AND TIGHT HOLE AT THAT MOVIE, BABY! YUMMY.
I'm sorry that I couldn't stay around for seconds BUT your kitty cats natural juices were so sweet and sensual, Honey - that i had to run off to the Men's Room to stroke my HARD COCK that was nearly bursting through the seems of my tight jeans while sniffing your panties (a prize that the finger fucking - panty bandit - never forgets to collect) and licking all of your natural juices off of my fingers! I'll have to say that you have quite a grip Baby as that pretty HOT CHOCOLATE kitty cat squeezed my hand harder than a handshake from The Terminator or Rambo - when you came and came and came! You had me so mesmerized and hypnotized from the moment that I saw you sashay in that movie theatre with that tight jean skirt and chocolate legs with a sweet surprise to die for that I had no choice but to follow you and sit next to you even if it wasn't the movie that I had paid to see! HE! HE! We'll keep that our little secret - and the next time you want to go to the movies and don't care if you miss the show - let me know. Make it a double feature and bring your home girl along for she was nearly as sweet and sensual as you - and after all -her kitty cat needs petting too. Keep me cummin, Baby!
Peace & Love!
Earl.
I'M ON MY KNEES and begging for my NEXT PIECE, PLEASE!
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Crap this was good, so hot and erotic. But an hour, those were the days.
So Nice
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WOW WOW
A Great write as anticipated. good write
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Wow, yet another great write!
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WOW
I want one of those movies you have taken your readers on one sensous ride and i feel ever stroke...wow! cold shower time hot little lady
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Hot Damn..
girlfriend this is my kind of story.
you rocked the hell out of this one.
I love the premise of your story and
everything else that followed.
you have a damn good imagination and
you sure are a nasty sweet thing.
I love it I love it I love it!Mmm
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Ty for your entry. Good Luck
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Love it! "J" you sneaky devile I think you 2 did a wonderful collabo with this piece. I would never look at going to the movies the same now 
Loved the imagery
-Boss
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omg i so have to read this you know J is my buddy and to see to hot great imaginational Artist collab sets my slut soul on fire
i totally love this
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OMG ~~~ This is so, so, so good.
Wow I really don't know what to say,
[ that's a good thing
]
I love this. I must read more from you and your friend
Jeremy0826.
I wish I could write like this.
Justgot2loveme
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Good Job at erotica...needs cold shower...
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*gasps* that was delicious, damn I feel sorry for the girlfriend missing out on such a sinfully wonderful movie I have always found it so impressive that you can pack such a vivid, sexy write into such a short story - this is what makes your flare as a writer so rare and beautiful to read...you're really one in a million I'm a very turned on girl right now lol.
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Wow
This had a lot of details and I love how your girlfriend didn't notice what was going on.
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Whew!
Oh my did you have popcorn with that? Hmmm, what was the movie playing? This was very erotic and so creative. A very clever and hot write.
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This was amazingly well written, as usual, Choco, but I think that the exclamation in the last line should be inside of the quotation marks. I just have an obsession of sorts with helping people out--no matter the mistake or problem they have.
I loved this because--as usual--your hot and steamy ideas blow my mind and I just want to reach into the screen, pull your vision out and watch as it occurs in front of me... though not to me, since I don't believe in that, for real.
But still, this was amazingly well written and your images are always so great. The way you write is plain outstanding.
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ok..
so quick question..Who was the star of the movie you uhmm..l.o.l. saw? yeah, that's what I thought!! l.o.l. very very hott stuff lady!!
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Love those long dark movies
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Love this
This brilliant. I want to be you.
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Erotic fantasy lives!
I had a fantasy fulfilled a couple of times in a movie theatre. I think I got lost in those thoughts while reading your piece. That is successful erotica! When you take someone else there with you. Well done, poetess!
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Teasingly exquisite... You think you got wet? My fingers were perspiring by the end of this You did overlook that he was sucking his fingers as he left however Erotic and exotic... a wonderful write.
Ken
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'Taking his finger and rubbing my clit I start to release my home made juices making my pussy wet.'
Wow!
I'm getting jealous...
Wish I could be next to you doing things what were done to you, cutie, plus something more!
You are a world of lustful pleasure, honey!
I feel like licking you from top to toe....
Only if that could be possible!
Kisses from a hungry and thirsty girl....
Galaxy2
You're damned good at looking for the situation that provide pleasure....
I feel like taking you to a movie....
making us enjoy each other...
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damn i wanna go to the movie theaters
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haha like i said. I love your mind..
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Oh what a show
You got to meet Rolly Fingers...LOL. This was fun to read, but why doesn't this ever happen to me. I'm going to the movies....see ya there? I hope! the Shaker
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LMAO! That's quite a fantasy and an
interesting place to have a sexual
encounter though, I am sure that it
happens quite often these days. It's
too bad the movie was only an hour huh?
lol Well done sweetie and keep writing!
Jeremy0826
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wow this is way good random stragers can do that to you! i ehjoyed it lotrs~
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So THAT was why you were cheesin when we left?? LOL!!! Smokin hot poem sis!!!
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I definetly have to go to the movies with you hon! That was soooooo damn hot! You are one horney chick!
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So what was the movie???
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LOL THIS ALSO WAS GOOD HOW DO YOU COME UP WITH THESE POEMS
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