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Temptation Fails

Temptation bites within the weakest hours.
One more time, only, one more…
  I could not bring you sorrow.
  Came out of no where,
Creeping into my mind…
The warmth of your arms,
  Fingertips creasing my skin.
  Sweet pleasure of every kiss.
Did you ever think…
I was really ever worth much,
  I am sorry,
  I am truely, not.
Should I hide from every face?
  Will I be missed…
  The sound of your voice,
Speaking only with truth.
Loving to the fullest extent.
  I am no longer weak.
  You helped build my strength.
Never forget,
Never leave,
  Please, keep in memory…
  How much you have lifted…
  By daring to love one another.

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  • maktub
    October 9, 2008
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    wow!!! that was great...truly. I loved the thought and emotion.
    Well done!
    Smile♫


    • Kandace
      October 9, 2008
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      cool!

      Thank you for your comment. It means a lot to hear a reader say that they felt the emotion right from the poem.