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I speak
No one hears me
I yell
No one sees me
I shout
No one feels me
I scream
No one understands me
My superpower, invisibility

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I wrote this in class

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  • shecantstopfalling.
    October 9, 2008
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    I like this. The end line was just brilliant. I love it. Great write.


  • Shannon62875
    October 9, 2008

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    WOW!!!

    This is a very good write.. I also felt the same at this point... When my parents was always fighting and divorcing.. i felt like i would try and try to make things better but they would never listen to anything i had to say... and they didnt know how much it hurt me to get over that... Keep up the great work!!

    Shannon*Leah