Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

[Still working on it...]

I don't want to wash away, don't make me wash away
The river fades away my color that I wish to stay
Oh yes, the water's nice, I'm sure, it has helped me stay alive
But not connected to the tree, how long do I survive
It's nice not being green and all, not shading children's eyes
But I don't know just where I'll fall, some awkward nice surprise
To fall upon a rock is nice or to fall about the ground
But to fall upon a shore or with water all around

Author notes

http://igorlaptev.deviantart.com/art/Fall-at-Brook-Falls-66234219

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)