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In Love With You...


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Inhaling the scent of your skin, I,
Never let this moment end,I want no other man.

Lustrous shine within your eyes, beautiful
On our bed a smile, tenderly drawing me to
Velvet sheets wrapped loosely around you, luv,
Energy of passion felt within the air, care-free

With every day that passes, I can't explain it, don't know how 
I just fell for the man within, don't even know if, I,
Trust myself to express it all, or sit, and wait
Honestly, you make me weak, your the one, I'm in love with

Your ways, your touch, your sweet kisses, what more can I say?
Our worlds collided head on, you & me, just us two
Understand me, I want no other, I'm in love with...YOU.

Author notes

Done in a hmm mirrored acrostic ?

Acrostic beginning word of each line spells out a word or phrase,
the one used here is "In love with you"

The end letters spell out the same giing a mirror effect

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  • Amera gold member
    October 9, 2008

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    This is beautifully penned and composed with class too. The form is absolutly amazing and the inage is of pure love and passion. Bravo!

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • The Drifter
    October 9, 2008

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    Baby, I just don't know what to say except it is so beautifully written. The content went straight to my heart. The flow goes so sweetly. So well done-such work, leaves me speechless.
    I love you.


  • cricketjeff gold member
    October 9, 2008

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    Beautiful, loving poetry and perfectly formed acrostics too.

    Wonderful stuff

    *smile*


  • Shannon62875
    October 9, 2008

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    aww

    This was really, really sweet... You expressed your emotions very, very well... Keep up the great work!!! You shoudl think aout entering my contest... I love reading Love poems...

    Shannon*Leah


  • nature
    October 9, 2008

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    What a suberb begining

    'Inhaling the scent of your skin, I,
    Never let this moment end,I want no other man.'

    True to carry forward such beauty in words tied up in strings of specific form are next to impossible.
    Great on your part to attempt the same with truthful words.

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