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My Last String

The walls are caving in and the ceiling has crushed my door -
Everytime I find an opening,
It gets blocked over and over.
When I close my eyes and pull my heart back in,
You reach into my self-casted darkness and grab my hand...
And you have me all over again.
My tears have ripped from my soul,
And my heart was locked behind a wall with no key,
But you shattered it with only words,
"By the way, Happy Anniversay."
My emotions shouldn't be tied to those words -
We're done,
We're over,
We're through,
But my heart only beats when it hears yours voice:
Bringing me - no tugging me - back to you...
I have the reality:
My soul knows you're a strand of broken string,
My heart tries to refuse your words
But it doesn't help with a mind running on empty,
Looking for fuel as it goes.

(NOT FINISHED)

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    October 12, 2008

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    tell me when you finish this, because i think one this is an amazing read, and from the sound of it, it looks like you need to. keep it flowing