Eroding spirit
fades away
Life crumbing to dust
carried softly into the breeze
Floating bits of my soul
rising above me
As I sit helpless
unable to stop its abandonment
Author notes
Credit artist: http://pekthong.deviantart.com/art/serenity-70698374
A contest entry
- Quickie? by kiwigirljacks.
525 points, ended October 9, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Struggling to find my muse lately :(
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When our own soul abandons us, it is indeed the worst erosion!
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Thank you
I agree completely, it is keeping our soul intact that is even harder to do
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Excellent take on the prompt.
Excellent emotional imagery.
Delila
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Thank you
Thank you so much. So much emotion speaking from the prompt to my hands on this one
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Wow.. this is a really strong write for this prompt. brother mine.. you did a wonderful job..
Best of luck..
Angel
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Thank you
Thank you my darling sister. This was such a wonderful picture to work with. How are you hun?
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