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Your Guardian Angel

My halo may be crooked
My wings slightly bent
My aura some what tainted
But be sure I'm heaven sent

To guide you through
and protect you from the pain
A sacred umbrella
To shield you from the rain.

My chorus may be off-key
My clouds a little grey
My heaven not quite perfect
But I am here to stay

I'm your guardian angel
And this I'll always be
I may always appear imperfect
But I'll always be me.

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  • KyleBerg gold member
    October 8, 2008
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    Awwwww this is so sweet.

    I love how there is rhyme but the timing is kind of out so it is imperfect to match the message of the poem -- very cleverly done!

    I loved the verses and the umbrella metaphor is wonderful.

    Great work with this poem and best of luck