finger touch,
soul bends,
warmth and warmth
trembling
truth told,
lies felled,
lips and lips
trembling
fearless dream,
heart pounds,
clutch and clutch
trembling
innocence,
consciousness,
kiss and kiss
trembling
merge
A contest entry
- Ultimate Love Poem Contest by SmokinHotWhiteTiger.
600 points, ended October 17, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
even robots know love. Do you see?
Comments
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Thank You For Entering
Well I must say this is a very unique oddly penned poem but it adds a whole new dimension to the depth and quality to my contest. I like the over all complexity to the poem itself and really love the warmth and devotion placed forth into this poem. I do enjoy the over all feeling and picturesque like picture that formulates within my brain as I read this. any ways good work and good luck -
Ecliptical Verse
Is this ever the undiluted burn of passion on the heart pounding prowl in verse. This is as timelessly breathless as a kiss its self.
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Nicely done
Short but perfect.
Jim
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