Cedar clouds form,
amongst each placid dream.
As I hover aimlessly,
between each cherished thought,
wading through,
every unpardonable peccadillo.
While my sightless eyes delve,
into their soul’s inferno.
evaluating every cinnamon plead.
But alas I have no time to tarry,
so I must plunge my decision within their heart,
sending them to their cataclysmic journey.
Where my deathly angel will be the final judge,
clasping onto Anubis’ sacred blade,
to weigh their dithering souls.
Author notes
"I am universe, I am life "
http://steel-eyes.deviantart.com/art/Libra-16770859
ShadowsMidnightRose
A contest entry
- Zodiac Contest by Re-invention.
700 points, ended November 8, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Let me know how I did....
Comments
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mm dark and subliminal... I like that... you used a great word bank and a great flow too. Iam not sure where you took your prompt but wherever it went it was well performed...
thanks for entering!


