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Libra's Fate

Cedar clouds form,
amongst each placid dream.

As I hover aimlessly,
between each cherished thought,
wading through,
every unpardonable peccadillo.

While my sightless eyes delve,
into their soul’s inferno.
evaluating every cinnamon plead.

But alas I have no time to tarry,
so I must plunge my decision within their heart,
sending them to their cataclysmic journey.

Where my deathly angel will be the final judge,
clasping onto Anubis’ sacred blade,
to weigh their dithering souls.

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"I am universe, I am life "
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  • Re-invention silver member
    October 15, 2008

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    mm dark and subliminal... I like that... you used a great word bank and a great flow too. Iam not sure where you took your prompt but wherever it went it was well performed...
    thanks for entering!