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Emotions

Feeling the cool air on my face
As I walked a path of emotions,
Leaving me with tears
That seems to stay within.

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  • Cloudwatcher
    October 31, 2008

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    To see the pools welling up within strewn along on our inner paths, either jumping over the puddles or choosing to splash around in them. There is something beautiful about sadness, about being able to let yourself be sad and feel what is there to be felt.


  • Nom de Plume
    October 24, 2008

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    walked a path of emotions

    love the personification in this line... they can at times overwhelm us, but I guess they allow us to write beautiful poems, like the one I have just read..


  • 245Trioxin
    October 11, 2008

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    It's an isolated time of year, Thanksgiving may bring a gathering, but it's not the overwhelming sense of things.

    Like sweat cooling the flesh in front of a fan, comes autumn with it's colorful decay.


  • xeroabyss II
    October 10, 2008
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    Tis a lonely journey to travel.