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Searching/Temptress

I never once thought that
Such a beautiful woman was fated to me.
When those opportunities present themselves,
It's hard for me to oppose.
I laid next to you,
Your soft breath dancing across my cheek,
The exposed curves explored by my nervous fingers.
It seems you're some kind of goddess...
Venus herself; warm, sensual, loving.
Your lips caught mine, and it was hard to resist,
Considering my other partner.
You're so seductive;
And the miles and miles burn holes
In the communication we once had.
Separated, I feel cold, alone...
Like you are the only one for me.
Im sorry I can't be there;
I'd love to love you again,
But it seems impossible.
We just have to cope with the pain...
And when we see each other again,
Embrace like it's the last.

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Contest entry. But it's for Savannah.

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  • birch
    October 27, 2008
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    adorable. your ending was quite touching.