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~~Remember I Care~~

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I am writing this get well card
Just to let you know
I think of you each night and day
Praying for you to get well
Hoping you will soon be okay

It's definitely no fun being sick
Get well soon Edna,get well quick

So keep that positive attitude
Breathe in that country air
And when your feeling down and blue
Remember that I care



Susan Vessels written Oct 8th 2008

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Pic by Thomas Kinkade

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  • Pietro456
    October 24, 2008

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    Another Good One Here !

    Wow I really like you're style fo writing ! You say things so clearly that even a simple minded person ccoul dundrstand. Keep up the Great work.


  • Blankscreen2222
    October 23, 2008

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    I absolutely love the background and the words fit so well in with the sense of peace and tranquility.

    It's Really lovely.

    Georgina.


  • gaze
    October 22, 2008

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    Beautiful poem to wish Edna well. It's always so nice to know that many people care and send good thoughts.
    Lovely picture too


  • Sir Ima Cucumber
    October 20, 2008

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    Lovely words. I'm sure both Hugh and Edna appreciate them.

    A get well card, I like that idea, of calling your poem that!

  • SoulWhispher
    October 20, 2008

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    Well written

    This is a most beautiful get well card, I know she will love it, you as always are a great poetess, blessings John


  • poetryality silver member
    October 19, 2008

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    An inspiring Hallmark here dear sister. I know this beautiful poem will bring a smile to dear Queen Edna's face.

    I wish you well in the tribute/contest.



    Always ♥

    Renee


  • Hinemoa silver member
    October 18, 2008

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    A lovely message Susan for Edna, I know she'll receive great comfort from your words. I hope you too are feeling much better, I know it must be hard for you and your family too.
    Hine


  • J aime Coudre silver member
    October 17, 2008
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    A nice cheery message for Queen Edna


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    October 15, 2008
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    A bright, happy message
    to cheer a hopeful patient!


  • daviscth silver member
    October 12, 2008

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    This is a wonderful caring poem Susan. It goes so well with the picture too. It's like reading a card. Good luck sweetie.


  • catz Moderators member
    October 11, 2008

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    'Remember that I care'... these are such caring, touching words when spoken from the heart as you have done here, Sis

    A thoughtful poem. I wish you good luck in the contest

    love and
    Dee


  • earthstar
    October 10, 2008

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    i agree it no fun being sick. sometimes one needs to slow down and look at life. i think illness is trying to tell us something. I hope your friend gets better.
    I having one of though times i am getting better at reading the signs to slow down.


  • Maureen silver member
    October 10, 2008

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    Hey Sis!

    I'm sure Edna loved your get well card..it's as good as (or better than) a Hallmark card (when you care enough to send the very best!). I'm sure she loved the Thomas Kinkade painting, too!

    Best Wishes for you in this contest! I hope Edna gets some relief from the pain in her ankle soon!

    Love Ya!
    ♥ Maureen


  • hugh wyles silver member
    October 10, 2008

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    Dear Molly,

    To say the queen is deeply touched
    would be an understatement
    fir, just like you, she suffers too
    from pains without abatement.

    Although her heart's more stable now
    the pain that seems to rankle
    her constantly is the injury
    she did to her right ankle.

    Amongst the poems I've printed out
    to stand upon the shelf,
    none is more rated or appreciated
    when you're so ill yourself.

    Edna is indeed touched by the beauty of your words and the picture you have chosen to accompany them.
    Thankyou, dear daughter and best of luck in the voting.

    Applause, love and hugs, XXX Hugh (R.) Da.


  • MargaretG
    October 10, 2008

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    Kind wishes

    are like bread on the water, they come back ten-fold.
    "And when you're feeling down and blue
    Remember that I care"
    We must remember that when we are feeling lonely, it is only a feeling, and dozens or even hundreds of people are holding us in their hearts. This is a lovely poem of compassion and encouragement. Well done Susan, and good luck!


  • Ethereal One gold member
    October 9, 2008

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    This is a wonderful get-well poem that you have written. I know your friend will appreciate your caring words.

    Good luck in the contest!

    Jeannette


  • queen Moderators member
    October 9, 2008

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    This is so good, good luck in the contest


  • melphleg gold member
    October 9, 2008

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    Bravo. Very nice card. I'm sure your friends will be encouraged by your love and care. You have great compassion. It is wonderful you use your talent to encourage your friends.


  • angelica silver member
    October 8, 2008

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    Dear Susan, Sorry sweety Jenelda was on my computer and she forgot to sign out.
    I love your message to Edna very much. Beautifully written sweetheart.Good luck in the voting.
    Love Joan


  • jenelda silver member
    October 8, 2008

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    Dear Susan, a very lovely get well message for Edna, I know she'll appreciate it very much.
    Love Jen


  • Melodies
    October 8, 2008

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    Sweet comfort and beautiful, too!

    Lovely! So pretty, both in words and art... makes the reader want to hug somebody!


  • crivanea silver member
    October 8, 2008

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    awwww..that is so sweet!!! perfect hallmark card..lol..i love it!..adorable..sincere...and just perfect..the pic is too cute!..hope the person address in this poem feels better soon. there r many people wishing for u to get better.


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    October 8, 2008

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    Beautiful Sentiments, Susan!!!

    I hope your friend is feeling better soon... And I'm wishing you all the best of luck in the contest!!! Take care, you're an angel!!! Peace Always, Cyn


  • penman gold member
    October 8, 2008

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    Wonderful

    Very creative and so well expressed. A marvelous write. So very well done, best of luck in the contest.


  • delightfulmess silver member
    October 8, 2008

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    awe... you are such a sweet soul sis
    This is a beautiful get well wish.



    Delila

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