it's been a while since i picked up
this pen
unlock my heart and
let you in
2 years ago it came so
easy to me
your love open my eyes it wasn't hard for my heart to see
how i wanted to live
my life
me your man and
you my wife
truthfully i didnt know i'ld
feel this way
and even though i dont remember
the exact day
i knew it felt
real
and time changes a lot of things
but not how i feel
not how i wait
by the phone
not when your're gone
i realize i'm alone
Baby I know its been a while since i first
said those words to you
but those words still ring true
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the flow to this is amazing.
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this is a truly lovely write. so full of emotion, emotion that usually can only be expressed on paper. fantastic
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Aw this poem went truly into the very heart of the matter, I liked the vibe I got from this.
And it is true what you say in your poem, that time changes a lot of things but not how you feel.
I liked that because it is so true, part of what emotional and physical pain comes from, and part of what love is about after all, no matter what time doesn't matter in love, there really is no time.
how i wanted to live
my life
me your man and
you my wife
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That was so sweet, I am sure if you give this to a special lady she will appreciate this for the words are stunning.
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