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This place that I hate

Once great door now fiery hell
Deserter of the love it held
Find me sad
Find me weaping
Find me fallen by the willow, ever creeping

Never known
Never cared
Dimmed are all the great memories we shared
Never be the words "Rest In Peace" on the dim, cold rock he fared

What if I just ran away
Fleeing towards the dawn of day
Resting now, by the fires edge
Murmering a silent pledge

"We be weakened"
"We be strong"
"We find the meaning of the ever so long"
"Find this hole"
"Find the soul"
"Never see my one true goal"

If the blade shall pierce the skin
Once truly the hell will end

This place of mine
Once just fine
Home at last
Home, I shall never find

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  • XxForeverFaithfulxX
    November 18, 2008

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    This is kind of confusing but in a way I understand it. I really like it and it does kind of make sence. Keep up the good work.

    In Christ,
    ~Kayla


  • cbizzle
    October 8, 2008
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    I know this doesnt make sence but it does to me, and thats all that counts, right?