Lying upon a fluffy white cloud of mine,
far above Rain’s light encasement of Mother Earth.
Laying, stretched out, my pensive thoughts flutter.
Humming soft melodic tunes; they reach your ears and you sigh.
This sweet exhale draws me closer to your prominent presence.
Invisible and unseen, yet I still know you're there;
a lovely angel resting upon my Cloud Nine.
But alas unable to stay, you unwillingly depart.
My thoughts run far away, the rain pouring down to Earth;
This soft silver lining turns black.
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S a m a n t h a M a r i e
A contest entry
- Many Few Random Prompt Options Contest by No longer in use.
600 points, ended October 23, 2008, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Every cloud has a silver lining even if it is unintentional.
But alas you can't stay, you unwillingly go.
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Woot. I love the ending. So sad and...Whoot!!! haha. Anyway. Like I said on your revised one this one is better because it is short and dark.
I like it. Because I'm short and dark... lol Um...dark on the inside...hehe :S Although I wouldn't mind being dark on the outside. All tanned and all. Nice work on the poem. 
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that started of so good, but thsn you ended it all emo like you usually do
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Thanks(for the first half of the comment) but I didn't want to end it like that. I wanted to end it sweetly but it was a prompt contest. And my prompt was "Everything is all fine until the silver-lining upon cloud 9 is taken away." - J. M. Spenser (Quote)
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love it!
beautiful poem my twin sis
just like the rest of ur stuff
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awh thanks love
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