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Ice...Gone

I turned cold after you left
The only person who could keep me sane...
...Left

It wasn't without a word
It wasn't forever
But...
You left me dangling
Holding onto those ropes tightly
The ropes that were wound by our love

I felt the ropes breaking
Mine and its strength fading
Tearing apart and dying

I felt the ropes strengthen
I saw your face, your smile
My strength grew
I smiled once again
My heart warmed once again

You reached your hand out to me
I couldn't reach it
You pulled our rope
Your strength greater than ever

Nothing broke
Our hands met
You pulled me up with ease
You held me...
...Never letting go

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  • AdamAndEve
    November 19, 2008

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    i love "the ropes that were wound by our love" this makes me think of two people who met on the internet and feelll in love and met eachother for the first time. kinda like Sasquatch Monkey...do you knowl him? IDK what him and his GF were about but he met her on here and then went to south carlonia to meet her. she turned out to be evil, but still. its nice to know that it happens sometimes, even if it doesnt last.

    i love this poem, darling