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Microphone Voices

Amplified attitude lively animating
rhythmical projection, gently touching one's inner soul.
Connections perhaps, intertwining notes of experiences,
filling past's with theatrical memories.

One mans journey cataloged in tales,
generations past.
Vocalization protruding,
pain & pleasure,
invoking memories.

Anger,  ~~~ personified dialog,
alive with emotional turmoil.
Expressions of emotion stampeding hearts,
sometimes the unspoken word is best,
kept locked away in a box of indiscretions.

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Prompt Title : Microphone Voices

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  • sidereal silver member
    October 27, 2008

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    this is really well written, I love all the imagery and metaphors within this piece. I liked where you went with this in relation to the title that I gave you. I loved the first stanza, it was amazing.

    thanks for entering and goodluck

  • Nevel
    October 10, 2008

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    Very nicely done. First stanza was a bit complicated. Your last three lines are very strong. Not sure about the use of different size of letters...(my opinion ) Good luck in the contest

  • K a t gold member
    October 10, 2008

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    WOW!! Sissy.. I so love this poem.. this is a very strong and powerful piece. for me I loved the last 3 lines. though the one line that stood out to me the most was this one "sometimes the unspoken word is best,"

    good luck in the contest

    kat