Morning is breaking
and my heart's aching
Off, goes my alarm
My baby ain't in my arms
She's far away and I'm sad
When she comes back I'll be so glad
Country boy rappin'
nothing much happenin'
Since she's been gone
I'm hanging out all alone
I wanna be a big ass spider
arms all over her, I'll get inside her
Tappin' it hard like the Energizer bunny
She makes me laugh, so damn funny, honey
I wanna marry her, make her mine
then we'd be together forever, sippin' wine
Without her near, my flow is off, see
gotta get her back here, next to me
Aw no, Hell no, the single life ain't for real
Me and my shawty, dat's the real deal
Author notes
I hope you like my crack at freestyle/rap...just a little ditty about me and a girl so freakin' pretty...
~~~Written especially for Sharon, my Soulmate fo' sho' ~~~
A contest entry
- Show me how much you love... by Nidaeah.
1000 points, ended October 31, 2008, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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COOL BEANS YO!!
I like it. I could totally hear the beat behind that, good rythm, nice flow. There are a cupole things that I think could trip it up a little bit (then we'd be together forever, sippin' wine
Without her near, my flow is off, see
gotta get her back here, next to me
Aw no, Hell no, the single life ain't for real) It's just a little off, But GOOD JOB!
THank you and GOOD LUCK!
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LMFAO i dont even know what to say to this!
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