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Open Bottles

And the lights are
Flashing through the bedroom window
While the tears are falling inside
And my voice turns
To wimpers as my heart is split
And your last breath has escaped you
And the bottle is open on the floor

This room is so cold
Filled with misery and pain
Your words wipering from the walls
And your laugh is resouding through
I'm just scared to keep my promise
Even though I want you beside
And I know you'd understand
But I just can't stant this life










Do you see how it would be without you?
Do you see how our lives will change?
Do you know at all how it really is?

Author notes

not ment to scare people, but to make you see what life would be like without you

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  • meggie94x
    October 9, 2008
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    *sighs*, some people just don't understand how it would really be... ARGH lol


  • MusicIsMyLifeline
    October 9, 2008
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    wowo.
    very good.