It was hush hush
A mere fleeting moment
I was your dirty little secret;
and you were mine
You hold my heart; wear my passion
Undeniable karmic connection
Believing in the inconceivable
Looking into my soul
Your breath on my neck
Waking me at all hours
Just to say you love me;
It was worth it
Author notes
torrid: drying or scorching with heat; burning; parching
September 10, 2008 (my birthday ) 
I actually love this word, although spun a bit on the meaning.
A contest entry
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What did you think
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Nicely done. Great imagery! Thanks for entering my contest. I'm honored to have you share your work here. Good luck!
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i really like the way this was written. nice job. i'm really liking the way that you could imagine everything.
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I like the ambiguity of the wording and the way it is written, it could mean cheating, or it could simply refer to two people who wish to keep their liason a secret.
Having been on the receiving end of cheating, I think I'll favour the other interpretation lol
Good write.
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My favorite part was definitely:
"You hold my heart; wear my passion
Undeniable karmic connection"
That last stanza made me shiver and wish I had a dirty little secret like that
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Good write.. Although, I just dont understand what the whole point of cheating is... but I guess people get the thrill as being home wreckers sometimes... Best of luck in the contest!
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I guess thats one way to interpret it although thats not what I meant in the least
After re-reading it ( I tend to not read them again before submitting) I see where you get that impression,
Thanks for the comment
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I love the way you took this! The flow, of course, was great. I really loved reading this- at least it was worth it, eh? Thanks for entering, and good luck!
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Spun 'a bit'? I say more than that. Still, a great way to tap into a person imagination, well done and good luck.
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