Her life here is like a fairytale,
the nature it gives her breath
The waters have a healing power,
that keeps her far from her death
Her concave walls they drip with life,
embellishing the love she feels
The birds swoop down to speak to her,
her life seems so very surreal
Contemptuous in deeds the of man,
she seeks refuge deep in her woods
Denying access to violence and hate,
they allow in only what’s good
Unconstrained is how she lives her life,
her passions are free from all guilt
Strewn together from leaves and with love,
each night she rests safe in her quilt
Said of the species that resides with her,
they are all a gentle loving breed
Their habitat surrounds them all with such joy,
with their bounty there’s no need for greed
For all them to share this utopia,
the dwell in such unearthly delights
Their hearts must all live in true harmony,
all feeling most humble and contrite
Author notes
prompt #1 voculabory artwork ritual by maronski atdeviantart.com (bosiarbooger)
A contest entry
- [Gorgeous Vocabulary ♥] by whiterabbit..
400 points, ended October 29, 2008, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Imagery, Emotion, Imaginatinon by Commodore Rouge.
1050 points, ended November 30, 2008, 21 entries
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Comments
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Beautiful! Your words match the picture accompanying this poem insanely well! It sounds like you're writing about a woodland fairy or something, and I like the magical feeling your words give. I like how you rhyme, because you pair words that go very well together, not just because they fit the phrases and sound alike, but because they are able to "mold" with each other. A nice characteristic I thought I'd point out.
There is nothing I would change about this poem. You have a lovely way with words and I appreciate it.
Thanks for sharing.
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Beautiful! Your words match the picture accompanying this poem insanely well! It sounds like you're writing about a woodland fairy or something, and I like the magical feeling your words give. I like how you rhyme, because you pair words that go very well together, not just because they fit the phrases and sound alike, but because they are able to "mold" with each other. A nice characteristic I thought I'd point out.
There is nothing I would change about this poem. You have a lovely way with words and I appreciate it. Thanks for sharing.
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Beautiful! Your words match the picture accompanying this poem insanely well! It sounds like you're writing about a woodland fairy or something, and I like the magical feeling your words give. I like how you rhyme, because you pair words that go very well together, not just because they fit the phrases and sound alike, but because they are able to "mold" with each other. A nice characteristic I thought I'd point out.
There is nothing I would change about this poem. You have a lovely way with words and I appreciate it. Thanks for sharing.
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This is just so beautiful. I love it. The imagery and the descriptions are wonderful. The picture goes perfect with the poem and adds to the imagery. Fantastic write and thanks for entering.
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excellent
Woven with words of beauty and magic
Love this
Best of luck in the contest
A winner in my book
Love the pic too
I have up some new ones hope you drop by
Hugs
Susan~~~
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Well Boog you have done it again! A great write here
Unconstrained is how she lives her life,
her passions are free from all guilt
Strewn together from leaves and with love,
each night she rests safe in her quilt
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Wow ! !
Best of luck in this one (not that you need it
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