As I watch Tigerstar by Scourge's claws.
I looked at Blameblepaw. He had Tigerstar's amber eyes and his pelt.
I looked at TIgerstar.
Tigerstar was dieing 9 times.
I looked back at Brameblepaw.
His amber eyes were on me.
I sees Tigerstar in Blameblepaw.
What did you think
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lol ok...the title is odd, maby you should shorten it a lil and do SPELL CHECK!
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Try using spell check located above the box you type you poems in, and use comas in stead of periods.
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