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Firestar Sees Tigerstar In Bramebleclaw

As I watch Tigerstar by Scourge's claws.
I looked at Blameblepaw. He had Tigerstar's amber eyes and his pelt.
I looked at TIgerstar.
Tigerstar was dieing 9 times.
I looked back at Brameblepaw.
His amber eyes were on me.
I sees Tigerstar in Blameblepaw.

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  • The Tmnts Sister
    October 11, 2008

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    Try using spell check located above the box you type you poems in, and use comas in stead of periods.