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there is
something about photos
that makes you giddy
later

you just
want to close your eyes
& cast wire gauze over
yourself

because-

things in you
keep bumping into each other
& you feel so sick and tired
inside you

and you just
want to go somewhere and sleep
and hope and hope someone
still understands.


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  • Beauty Of Silence
    October 10, 2008

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    awww

    honneh honneh honneh... this is such a lovely poem... i'm gonna be as serious as possible here coz it seems to be a very intense and serious poem..

    I LOOOOOVEDDD IIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTT!!! YOU ROCK CHARRRUUUUUU!!!

    okay, now thats the most serious i could get at this time of the day alright... anyhoo, this is seriously heart-breaking. your words cling on to the heart darling. your last stanza made me wanna pounce onto you and just give you a big squeeezy hug. i may not act very understanding sometimes (okay like alot of times) and i'm not gonna pretend i do understand all the pain you're going through... but i'll be here by your side if you ever need me as your friend and maybe as a little sister. i love you charu... and yes, i will whip anyones ass if they mess with you!

    hugs and kisses,
    RANJI!


  • transit
    October 10, 2008

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    wow!

    This describes perfectly what I felt when I looked through old pictures. All the emotions just roll into one and it would be so good for that one moment to go back and just dissolve into that photgraph.

    I jope I am not one of those people who don't understand. I get crazy mood swings and they are just so nasty and I am sorry you have to take them so many times. I just get horrid when I get annoyed or sad. you are a lovely person and like you once said, the memories will make you happy instead of make you cry. lovely thing! just live by that and things will be better already.

    P.S. Veronique is writing poems. not here but on her blog. It was the funniest thing ever.

    loveees,
    transit~


  • Walk-Free
    October 9, 2008

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    this had me thinking that you were just typing this at the tip of your fingertips, not really knowing where the poem will take you.

    you just wrote.

    beautiful as always

    PS. could you give me a phrase? Porcelain Princess wants one

  • Miss Faith
    October 9, 2008
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    sweetie..

    I'm here if you need me..