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Harmony

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She plays to make the weather warm,
as the clouds run away to hide
To gently feed the trees that grow,
and rest there at her side

They have grown a harp for her,
to push the cooling breeze
She calmly sits and plays for days,
making waves upon the seas

The Autumn harvest calls to her,
to ripen all its goods
She plays to shine the moon at night,
tickling branches in the woods

Some music brings the driving rain,
for life to drink it in
Snowflakes dance to meet the ground,
to let the drifts begin

Her playing seems to start the cry,
of woeful coyote howls
The huge round eyes and soothing hoot,
she has given to the owls 

Strumming there for all of life,
to set our souls so free
The trees have given her a name,
they call her Harmony

She’s played for a millennia,
she has taken nothing in return
She plays to bring her people hope,
she plays so we may learn

Author notes

"bah-humbug" Prompt #29 bring your own picture: Daughter of Oaks King by Candra atdeviantart.com

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  • RainbowSky
    July 10

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    this piece is so amazing. i really cant say much else, it was awesome. thank you for this submission.


  • Paloszoo gold member
    January 30
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    Oh it let me!! YAY!

  • Paloszoo gold member
    January 30
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    Oh, I commented on this one before, so it won't let me give you clappies. poop. I still think this is an amazing piece. Exsquisite! I thank you for entering my humble contest. It's always a pleasure to read a favorite's work


  • echo-ink
    January 5
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    WOW!
    Finals.


  • Shancy Fayre
    January 5
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    This is very good. I like it a lot. Thank you for entering. Shancy.


  • LadyOfFate
    October 11, 2008

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    kinda reminds me of a ballad I heard when I was younger. neat. well good luck in the contest and thanks for entering.


  • chilali
    October 9, 2008

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    This was so beautiful. Very lovely indeed with great vivid imagery. I cannot get enough of fantasy poems and you write them beautifully. The picture is just amazing as well. Well done. Good luck to you in the contest


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    October 8, 2008

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    excellent

    This is beautiful
    Filled with imagery and delight
    A winner in my book for sure
    Hugs
    Susan~~~

  • Paloszoo gold member
    October 8, 2008

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    Lovely entry! This is a beautifully crafted tale with spectacular imagery. As usual, your meter and rhyme are perfect. Good luck in the contest!


  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    October 8, 2008

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    Well penned entry. I love the pic and the background and font colours go so well with it too Love the story you have told here. Excellent take on the chosen pic Best of luck to you

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