Bloody and bruised, she falls to her knees,
Her rosary clenched in her fist.
What protection does she believe she will gain form this?
The music clanging,
Hardly music at all.
She sees no beauty in things she once saw as a cause
Who has she become? She’s no chosen one
Only a pawn in this game of life
Where's her God now… In the MIDST of all her strife?!!?
Eyes clenched, tears make a trail down her cheeks…
They scream, "SHE'S NOTHING!!"
Little do they know she's their Queen!
The daughter of Mary, Jesus’ whore
Her Rosary's hit the floor
A fist in her side, or was it a knife?
Her protection is gone, a faithless pawn, in the game of life…
Author notes
Um.... Be honest... I'm not sure if the flow is right yet...
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Powerful and strong piece..wow
Quite unique this is
Thank you for sharing and for being part of the contest
The best to you! -
now that I got some points thaought you would love some and good luck
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The flow was sketchy, but that is just what this piece needed. It brought reality and the feeling that this was spoken and felt Excellent write, great job and good luck in my contest!
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Her protection is gone...she was a faithless pawn, in the game of life. Very interesting poem! It does have some potential. Little more editing and it would be awesome.
Thank you for sharing it with us! Thank you for reading some of my poems! Been a while hope all is well.
's ~Sie
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