Violations, stop, don't go, do not
collect two hundred dollars are just
mere signs led by facist pigs who have
nothing better to do, but give us a headache
trying to play catch up. Can we violate what
belongs to us anyway? Are we allowing leadership
to govern what we say and do? Yes!!!
Author notes
PROMPT: "If I did not want others to violate my life, how could I voluntarily violate it myself?"
A contest entry
- Quote Quickie by poetryality.
600 points, ended October 10, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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You sound much like the voice of Richard Wright in the book "Black Boy" with this passage you've written.
Your voice sounds much like that of (radical) civil liberties proponents; "led by fascist pigs", women's, gay rights activists. I would call you Liberal because as it seems, Conservatives do not know who the government is. They say; "no big government". I am the government, you, our children, the future government. It is our monies that pay the salaries of our public official, public servants.
Anywho...off my soapbox. LOL I agree with what you’ve scribed!
Thank you for this entry and I wish you well in the challenge.
Much Love & Respect ♥
Renee
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I get what you are saying, it's just that you didn't space the lines right or you could have rephrased the poem
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