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Lady of Avalon

There are many ladies of Camelot.
None, so well known as she.
Gwenivere, Elaine are beautiful, it is true.
One outshines all of them.
She has many names.

She has been called
lady, queen,
witch and whore.
No one truly knows the whole story.
Through the lies, she kept her grace
being the dutiful wife and mother.

All she wanted was someone
to love and be loved in return.
Lost and alone, sent away
to learn her destiny.

A destiny she forced upon her,
A vessel, she was used and abused.
Tricked by the very person she loved.
The innocent girl turned into a wise woman.

If others could only see
what lie beneath the mask
was simply Morgaine Le Faye.

Author notes

Based off the book "Mists of Avalon"

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  • cricketjeff gold member
    November 7, 2008

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    Morgana such a dark and mysterious lady, very well worked poetry

    Thanks for a great entry.

  • Liquid memories
    October 12, 2008

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    quite a woman I would say, enough to make this day.


  • ronnica
    October 9, 2008

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    I never knew too much about this lady but I do know she played a big part in the Camelot tale. and its witchery etc, A very small but interesting insight into her life,


  • WolfHeart
    October 8, 2008

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    Love this - Morgaine is one of my favorites. Your work continues to grow and improve - keep up the good work.


  • karas
    October 8, 2008
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    Very good

    nice, very nice. Lovely story poem.

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