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frost

her chilled breath
caressed dew drops,
shocking them
into stone statues,

left to wait,
wait
until rebirth

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Written October 8, 2008

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  • MargaretG
    October 23, 2008

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    I like this personification, and juxtaposition of caress/shock is interesting. It's a short poem, but full of imagery, I enjoyed reading.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 10, 2008

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    Oh this was interesting left me with alot to think about thank you for your entry goodluck to you in the contest best wishes


  • Draig aine gold member
    October 10, 2008
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    nice

    well designed ,liked very much


  • going nowhere
    October 8, 2008

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    waiting is the hardest part... for the warmth to return and new life to bring hope. i liked your take. thank you