You make me seem like
i'm the one but we both
know that's just not true
and you look back at yesterday
and you see that everything that
was once a beautiful memory
is best looked at towards
tomorrow and the start of
somethings new and maybe
then yuo wull see what
you have been looking for
all along
Author notes
Tomorrow is only the start of something new
A contest entry
- Make Your Own Prompt by Judith Chandler.
800 points, ended October 22, 2008, 4 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Beautiful. I love how you've penned in such deep emotions with just a small story. I guess it is the best thing to do, to look forward for tomorrow rather than dwell on the mishaps of yesterday. Well penned. Congrats on the HM!
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Thank you very much but could you please type your prompt in the author's notes.
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Thanks for adding the prompt as requested and thanks so much for entering my contest.
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