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Cavernous

Concrete takes
Away everyting that is
Viable and can
Eradicate the
Rhetoric of your soon to be
Nonexistent
Odious and otherwise
Unrealistic
Spirit

Author notes

this poem is about a prison cell

A contest entry

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  • PerfectImperfection
    October 14, 2008

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    A well spoken acrostic penned within these lines. Great depth to convey what lies in between the thoughts as well. Thank you for your entry & Best wishes in the contest!


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    October 8, 2008

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    well done! we could feel the cold harshness of this
    concrete poem....
    ears/Seattle
    shivers you to read it!
    good job!