'I thought we were best friends...'
The thought echoed in my head.
And yet there they were, holding hands, kissing...
And I never even saw it coming; all the signs were there
Yet I denied them as if they were trivial.
It started with my heart; slowly being filled to the brim
with a hatred unlike any other I've ever felt.
Such a cruel hand have I been dealt...
You called it fate, and told me to disappear
So of course I believed you, and did so with a single tear.
And from that single tear were born thousands more.
Watching from the shadows; listening to your laughter.
I would never be the same person as I had been from that moment after.
Paralyzed by the certainty of what had just occurred.
Burned deep within my brain, forever to remain.
I remember when I called you up, and the words that were spoken
"I believe I know how bad you're feeling, for you've just been badly heartbroken"
Those words still echo within the halls of my brain.
And no matter how hard I try to erase them, there they shall always remain...
Author notes
2. “Apologies are earned. I give them away. You don’t deserve what I have. You ruined everything. Make sure you know that and maybe next time we’ll see. But right now, no, you can’t apologize. You don’t even deserve to breathe.”
A contest entry
- And So I Re-Introduced the Story... by lowercase prelude.
1500 points, ended October 21, 2008, 9 entries
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Comments
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Such strong emotion
Very raw and honest -
I loved it
Chris I am sorry that this happened to you but this is a great write it really is
s because I sensed your pain in this I have been hurt like this sorry it happened to you



