A drug, you are my passion pill,
addicted to you, lost my free will.
A prince of darkness, peace slayer,
quite the actor, quite the player.
Peach petals soft, touches tender,
pearl of love, seduce, surrender.
To a place I have never been,
into night of temptation and sin.
Losing control, we would partake,
what became my biggest mistake.
Now all thats left, agony and pain.
and longing to be with you again.
Author notes
Contests words for prompt
Petals, Pearl, Peace, Pill, Passion, Peach, Pain, Player
In a list
A contest entry
- Mix of the P word by yours truly Abe by Abe 1.
430 points, ended October 19, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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fab luv it
de feelins de emotions de sadness
thanx 4 yr entry
cheers abe
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Thanks 4 de nice comment.
Takre care, Sandy 
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Wonderful write..but so full of sadness. Oh how we do become addicted to love and when it is gone..well this write touches on the emotional current one could face.
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Thank You June
A lovely coment nyou have penned. It is appreciated. Hugs and Smiles. Take care. Sandy
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Superb
A very fine write, as usual. Imagery, rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Again, well done.
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Love Your Comment
Always appreciate a comment from you. I do value your opinion my friend. You take care. Hugs asnd Smiles.
Sandy
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You outdid yourself with this one! It flowed so smoothly I never even noticed all the prompt words till your mentioned them. Beautifully done!
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Good Morning Rob
Your comment is so kind and made me smile. Thank you for dropping by. Always a pleasure. Hugs and Smiles.
Sandy
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Beautiful sensual piece and added the pain with such sadness.
I loved it
Best wishes to you
Julie
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Thank You Julie
Good Morning, Thank you for stopping by and reading.I appreciate your very nice comment. You take care, Sandy
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Wow so Well Done
This is a great entry and you have used the prompt words to great effect. I really enjoyed this read, romantic and sad, it touches the reader, great job, Blessings John
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Good Afternoon John
I always enjoy reading your comments when you drop by. I hope all is going well today. Thank you for this lovely comment. Hugs and Smiles to you. Take care. Blessings to you.
Love Ya, Sandy
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Sandy
Sounds like someone that has been burned. The player always plays and mostly wins. The words should be noted. Especially here on AP.
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Thank You Bob
Always a pleasure and always brings a smile when you drop by. Take care. Sandy
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Loosing contraol..we partake in love's slendour! wonderful wording and very good usage of the word bank dear! Godo luck in your contest ~Sie
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Hello Sie
Thank you for the nice comment. You take care. Sandy
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Very good poem.
But I like:
Peach petals soft, touches tender,
pearl of love, seduce, surrender.
To a place I have never been,
into night of temptation and sin.
Losing control, we would partake,
what became my biggest mistake.
Now all thats left, agony and pain.
and longing to be with you again.
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Thank You
Hello Cindy, I appreciate you stopping by and reading. Thank you for the nice comment. Take care, Sandy
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I like this.
Straight. there is much understanding in what transpires, as well as the reasons for this choice. You have 'activitated' the words well. Frans
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Hello My Friend
Your comment was lovely and most appreciated. Hugs and Smiles to you. Always brightens my day when you stop by. Take care.
Bless You and Yours,
Sandy ;f
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