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hold me tight

i can look you in the eyes
i will see there are no lies
i'm not big or strong
and i feel like everythings wrong
but i look at you and everythings right
i just want to hug you and hold you tight
i know most things i do are a mistake
sometimes i feel like im a fake
but looking at you i fly away
and in my heart you'll always stay
i know i'm not perfect you can see
but i look at you, you let me be
cause i think most the time im not right
i look at you i wanna be a sight
because babe your my light
i wanna hug you and hold you tight

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  • joleahe
    October 24, 2008
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    this is a cute poem. very touching thank you for entering


  • Dead Red Head
    October 10, 2008
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    Very cute, but learn to capitalize. It's hard to take you seriously when you don't.


  • RAWR-itsPurplePixie
    October 9, 2008
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    AWW this is so sweet. Nice rhyme scheme too. I hope you place well in the contest.