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By The Riverside (Triolet)

Down by the riverside
It's quiet now, almost sunset
Daytime hub bub did quickly subside
Down by the riverside
Lulled by lapping of rising tide
No better feeling can I get
Down by the riverside
It's quiet now, almost sunset.

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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    October 11, 2008

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    aw now this is a cute formed poem, nice flow and humorous too, good luck in her contest as it looks interesting
    Linda

  • carole21
    October 8, 2008
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    nicely done .. thanks for the contest entry