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What do YOU see when you look in the mirror?

When I look in the mirror, what do I see?
I strange creature looking back at me
Someone with a face but no soul to match
So I turn around and never look back
My soul is dark and my heart is black
I am a walking beast, its just a matter of fact
The mirror is a reflection of what your supposed to be
So why is it that when I look, I can't see?
I can't see a person, no face or eyes
But a being filled with hate and lies
No ioda or clue of what it's like to be
We're in a world filled with lies, that's all I see
My body is a portrait of my mistakes in the past
But this so called happiness that cannot last
So my life as I know it will now cease to exist
And this small peice of mirror  will be my assist

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  • BlackBloodyRose
    October 15, 2008
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    wow. so painful. so pure in ur self loathing. I LOVE IT