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...silence...

nothing is more honest then silence,

words deceive,

they cannot contain truth,

only in silence is truth,

the answer can be find only in silence,

nourish the silence,

love the silence,

it's the silence wich will bring you luck,

hold the silence,

and if you can't do it anymore,

then,

listen to the silence...

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  • Lislaine
    October 14, 2008
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    Waw!! I like it very much!! GOODLUCK

  • If I was a ghost
    October 11, 2008

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    Amazingness once again, sometimes only silence can make it strong, helping us hear ourselves too, the truth inside...