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Autumn (1)

As the autumn leaves
appear
And change the scene we've had all
year
Just like a carpet made of
down
It’s strewn with nature's golden
gown

As on the meadow over
yonder
I gaze with awe and silent
wonder
On the boughs of dead dark
trees
Branches swaying in the
breeze

Never shedding brighter
gifts
In autumn glorious colours
shift
They flutter in the morning
light
And lay in mounds of hues so
bright

Soon the winter will
begin
To change the vision once
again

And so the seasons come and
go
But none will have the autumn
glow

Jenny Lloyd

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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    May 6

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    Thank you for your beautifully spoken entry, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    January 16

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    Autumn & Rhyme

    This is an excellent write Also My favorite time of the year with beautiful Rhyme.
    Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.
    ED.


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    November 19, 2008

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    Congratulations on the trophies you have won with this poem, it's a great write and your imagery is excellent.

    All the best...Sue


  • Rhythm Child
    November 19, 2008

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    A great entry
    thanks for taking part, wishing you luck would be an insult to your talent so take care

    message me for anything
    Billy (Rhythm Child


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    October 11, 2008

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    Beautiful. This is rich with autumn'sbeauty, grand imagery and a wonderful flow to your wordds.

    Thank you for entering and good luck.
    Storm

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