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First Kiss of Bliss

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                                          First Kiss of Bliss 

                         Here with the boundaries of flesh undone,

where one body ends, and the other begun.

Our souls seem trapped in erotic bliss,

As they have been, since that very first kiss.

I feel her hands on my body as they roam,

And I slowly push myself into her erotic zone.

Housing her passion, quenching my desire,

To love her more, and not put out this fire.

Her inner muscles bare down on me,

Holding me captive, not letting me free.

Her body trembles and starts to quake,

Orgasmic pleasures that can not wait.

  

I hear her cry out into the night,

Erotic words of sexual delight.  

The approaching eruption from within our loins,

Anticipating the moment when our love juices join.

Pumping and thrusting in ecstasy's dance, 

Erotic sensations put us in a trance.

The waves of pleasure shoot up my phallus,

As dew drops of love flow from her vaginal palace.

I gaze upon her beautiful mascara'd blue her eyes,

And I hear the gutteral moans of extacy in her cries.

Explosions of passion, almost drives me insane,

And I thrust into her body again, and again.

We collapse on eachother,as we kiss and relent,

With exhausted bodies, and passions spent.

My head lay on her full heaving chest

And our bodies recupe, after a few minutes rest.

We enjoy each other in loves sweet after glow,

And she fondles my staff and again I grow.

I look in her eyes and see she wants to be kissed

So again I tenderly give her that Kiss of Bliss.

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Option #3 For sensual Poems contest, ZENDA-LOKKI

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  • LovingPhoenix
    November 11
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    Very erotic! Wow! Excellent write, you definantly portray desire and passion!


  • Reba
    June 28
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    Hot Stuff....................flows like lava from an erupting volcano. Beautiful.


  • Zenda-Lokki silver member
    December 10, 2008

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    Loved the picture with this and the poem matched perfectly. Fantastic write, thank you for your entry xx Oh and congrats on the previous HM xx


  • Rheea gold member
    November 11, 2008

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    Blue eyes..... If she had green eyes you would have taken the gold. Blue eyes are very common.
    Very surprised you did not know this.
    ahh you yankee cowboy Marines =)


  • hotchocolate gold member
    October 9, 2008
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    This was amazingly written and I enjoyed reading this write! Good luck in the contest


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    October 9, 2008

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    Beautiful and mesmerizing lines in
    this piece. I love the imagery and
    rhyme that you used here. Well done
    and all the best to you in this contest!
    I hope that you do well with this one!




    Jeremy0826


  • Mrs LadyEnthralling
    October 8, 2008

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    thus far you the only person did exactly what i ask you only made one error i need the link to this romantic picture use if you dont no it put None in your notes please other than that you are superb on this whole piece


  • Rheea gold member
    October 8, 2008
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    my my cowboy my my my

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