Liquid
wavered bastard
Chromed soul
internal led
Heavy
drowning me
Gasping
breath turns to frost
Scrape ice
atop my tongue
Imbedded hatred
spoons me
Tightest grip
pull it together
Rips at the seams
one stitch left
Holding on
pressure builds
Falls down
folds
Gliding
Paper plane
Aimlessly
adrift a crowd
Orchestration
symphony of smiles
Yet
they’ll never know
Author notes
what do u see when u look in the mirror?
A contest entry
- Reflections-What Do You See? by BlackBloodyRose.
450 points, ended October 15, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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very meaningfull, painful.
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Hell yes. Simple. Raw. Power.
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