Satisfaction

The song of divine to play and rest
Gone is this child hood full of jest
As big girl tweaked my red cheek
Revenge jump pulls her curls weak.

Youth got me around illustration.
Pen marks all in poetic confusion.
Shadow moves to my fascination.
Life now plays within resonation.

Author notes

Second new poem as required.
Thoughts behind my poetry book 'Mithya'

A contest entry

Best Poems Ever by Scion. 900 points, ended October 27, 2008, 29 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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By me, right now

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fluffatron69
October 20, 2008

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Very profound, I enjoyed reading this, and you manage quite a strong personal expression in so few words... Got to say I like the lines: -

"Shadow moves to my fascination.
Life now plays within resonation."
Scion
October 9, 2008

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This was refreshing. I have to tell you, compared to the other, this seems so collective and concise. Thank You. The content of this and the theme are very unique and very personal it seems. The transition between ideas is a bit gray scale but I think I understood the idea of using your childhood memories as inspiration. and your purpose in this.. Your first stanza is all description and memory (wonderfully depicted) then your second is all meaning of 'ations'. Clever, clever. Way to SHOW, not TELL. Kudos for you x2.
I love your purposeful resonation. That made me smile
Cheers, Scion

Score:
R-9
T-8.8
TH-8.7
S-8.7
U-8.8
G-8.5
Ttl-52.5
Bob Fox
October 8, 2008
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lol
Kind of a cute little piece of poetry with a fine rhyme. Something to make us all smile.
- nature mithya
  October 8, 2008
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  Thanks
  As a child I was very naughty.
  For protection always ran and hid behind Sister Superiors Skirts when chased by big girls for I had jumped and pulled their long hair pleats.
  Reaction to getting my cheeks pinched.
  
  Lol