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A star to state my place

Mummy and daddy are worried for me
  they keep me locked in a cuboard....
                I can't see.
When I go out. I wear a star
  Thats states my place, as I hold mummies arm.
  The soldiers in the street seem so BIG.
      I wonder what  look like to them?
        I must be as small as a twig.
I feel so special when every one stares...
    I tell mummy its my star,
      but she just ruffles my hair. 

I dont go to school anymore,
    I wonder why?
I even miss my numbers,
        and they used to make me cry.
My best friend went missing
                I wonder where?
There's shooting in the street now
        I feel so scared.

mummy cries at night now...
daddy holds her hand.
  wispers secrets in her ear.
'i love you, i have a plan'

We rarly go outside now,
the shots get louder every day.
there are scream in the street now,
it the street I where i used to play.

I'm very very scared now,
Daddy never came home,
mommy never stops crying now,
  we are so alone.

the soldiers came to find us
they bashed in our door,
it made such a noise
as it fell on the floor

mummy tried to portect me
screamed for them to leave.
there was a bang and mummy was gone
all that was left was a pool of red.

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  • HopelessPoet1087
    December 30, 2008
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    wow... this is just wow... im speechless...... just WOW... youre amazing alice

  • sweetdreamsforyou
    October 21, 2008
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    damn.

    omg. i was on the edge of my seat the whoole time. the holocaust is one of the worse events in the history of the world. it is also the most intriguing. you really captured the emotion of the people of the time. i can see a little girl walking down the street and hiding in closets. she seems so real. amazing write. i wish i could give you alot more than 3 applause. amazing.


  • MYsecondchance
    October 10, 2008

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    MAY ADOLF ROT IN HELL!

    OMG this is amazing i love this, it took me a second to realize you were talking about the holocaust. I have never read a poem like this and i enjoyed all of it. it is sad beyond measure what happened to those people so long ago.
    anyways i love the poem.


  • krystal balllll
    October 8, 2008
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    omg...dude this is totally depressing...i love it! Poor kid!


  • i lostmymind
    October 8, 2008

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    Wow

    This is so sad and scary, that this ever happened to people is disgusting. Really good job at describing everything and use of language and ideas as they are from a childs point of view. Good write

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