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My Fairy Godmother (Elza)

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If anyone was assigned to be my Fairy Godmother
And  I thank for being in my life with her magic
It was my kind and generous step-grandmother
Elza's great heart was boundless and knew no limits

As a child, Elza made all of my dreams come true
And she loved and accepted me unconditionally
I was her little daughter that she never had or knew
Even her blood looked at her love for me with envy

I was Elza's dancing ballerina at the age of four
Twirling and plieing on her sunken living room floor
Her home was a treasure chest I loved to explore
The smell of moth balls , endless halls and secret doors

A large stained-glass door opened out into a patio
That housed a most elaborate and wonderful pond
Cupid pouring water from a jar, a life-like statue
A Goddess protecting it, holding a beautiful wand

Large and colorful koi swam in the sparkling waters
White lily pads decorated their tranquility and stillness
I would sit and watch them swimming for endless hours
A child in a world of sweet dreams and eternal bliss


In the front of Elza’s house was a big, thick hedge
That housed a mysterious and very shy creature
I tried tirelessly to catch a glimpse of this being
He eluded me but ate the food I left quick and sure

Elza was a grandiose women, doing things in a big way
Endless parties - Christmas, Easter and birthdays
Gifts like a never-ending festival that always stayed
She spoiled with a love that our hearts and souls craved

Sadly, all the love we had couldn’t heal all of our wounds
And when I turned sixteen, my Fairy Godmother disappeared
The celestial clock struck twelve and it was over too soon
But I will remember and cherish my Fairy Godmother, so dear

 

 

 

Author notes

Dedicated to my Step-Grandmother, Elza Schallert
This 7th day of October, 2008
She left this world when I was 16.
Thank you for being in my life.
© Copyright by Karen Lee Gilbert Eisenlord
All Rights Reserved

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  • Absolutely beautiful...

    As always you never fail to astound & impress with your depth of feeling & moving narratives... And this is no exception, I was deeply touched throughout & enthralled til the end...
    Congratulations on a well deserved shiney...
    Keep up the good work...
    Well done!!!

    • Thank you Fritz for reading my poem about Elza...

      I am glad you liked it. She was and is very dear to me, and she always will be.

      Karen

  • Wow beautiful picture, congratulations on your gold trophy. Wow at sixteen your fairy God mother disapeared. This is a pretty cool poem.


  • Animals
    May 1
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    Congratulations on your gold trophy!
    You deserved it.
    Animals

    • I did not expect to win the gold at all. What a surprise. Thank you dear. It made my night. I will sleep holding the gold trophy. lol's


  • Animals
    May 1
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    This is beautiful! Thank you for entering!


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    October 14, 2008

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    Humm..a soft and wonderful poetry bringing a mystic story behind the words..I love the immages and the treatment used here to bring the essence of the prompt..well done..and thanks for sharing...


  • Rheea gold member
    October 8, 2008
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    Every child needs one.. lovely sister I wish she were still here.

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