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Love You

I love the way you smile
at me, biting your lip
eyes twinkling
face bright
with facination
staring at the way
I move
touching my hand
I love the way you kiss me
lips parted
just enough...
the taste of you
sends shivers down my spine
I love the way you hold me close
whispering words
that make my cheeks turn pink.
I love everything about you
dusty brown hair
deep inviting eyes
strong think hands
meant to interlace mine
I love that you took
my pain away,
lover of my soul,
healer of my heart,
I love you.

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To my Peter Pan
9/26/08

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  • XXPandoraReneeXX
    October 8, 2008

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    it was moving
    i liked it, it gave me the image of a girl overwhelmed by a guys emotional touches and looks

    props