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Little Doggie

 

Oh I have a little doggie
and my doggie likes to bark.
But my doggie is a coward
she’s afraid of the dark.
So I strapped a little flashlight
on my doggie really tight.
Now my little doggie plays
with all the critters of the night.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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This bkgrd is a pic of my dog Molly Pickles, [Jack Russel Terrier]
I wrote this little diddy for her today.
She really is scared of the dark

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  • catz Moderators member
    September 23

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    This is a cute little poem for for Molly Pickles Did you read it to her ?
    It's fun writing about our pets, isn't it. They're so innocently inspiring, even of their ornery moments.
    I can just picture your doggie scampering around in the light of her flashlight or chasing the spot it makes against the trees and walls. My cat, Boss used to do that. What would we do without our precious pets.

    A good write, Sis

    love and
    Dee

  • bj1995
    January 11
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    that is cute. u are really good.


  • hawkeslake gold member
    November 18, 2008

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    I love the ditty and the background! Went to your Deviantart site as well, and love the graphics (the creation of which is a total mystery to me.) Best wishes.


  • Patpowers
    November 7, 2008

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    Cute rhyme! I liked this and the picture of your dog. BRAVO!!


  • Sunshine1
    October 28, 2008
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    love it

    this is a very cute write,and little molly is very cute to


  • Pearl-1
    October 13, 2008
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    a really sweet poem Dove


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    October 9, 2008

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    awwww this is a cutie...well, in fact I see three of them

    I am sometimes surprised what you can buy for your doggie in the stores, and also what some people would give to their doggie...
    But I am sure for you it's only a ridle...


    Sweet ridle Dove,
    XXJeannette


  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    October 8, 2008

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    What a delightful narrative of your furry friend, fun and a joy to read, thanks for sharing.

    Dennis


    • Dove
      October 9, 2008
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      Thank you Dennis, I always get a smile when I inspire you to type that little birdie emoticon


  • queen Moderators member
    October 8, 2008

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    this is so cute i can just picture her wearing a flashlight

  • Warrior7
    October 8, 2008

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    Awwwwww how cute of a poem and so is the bkgd
    did you really strap a light to her?

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