purple glare

I want to be put together

in a tangram
of seven rooms,

each big as a continent,

transparent,

reorganizing my world's melic
for exercising, flexible enough
to fold into a dollhouse of brevity

where the light isn't too ultraviolet
and abstract
as petrified wood

Author notes

picture credit: Jealousy by manips-of-artist2

worcalc.com => 44 words

A contest entry

Pretty Picture Prompt # 22 by kiwigirljacks. 600 points, ended October 13, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

my process of editing my poetry should show through this scenario, or do you have a kind suggestion? [delicate comments at all times]

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storiesuntold
October 15, 2008
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What a muse
This brings about so many questions I hope you continue I so want to read it when your finnished
kiwigirljacks
October 10, 2008

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It's like wanting flexibility in life.. not too expansive, not too restrictive! Abstract and cool take!
LadyDementia
October 9, 2008

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Nice write, quite abstract to me. I do like the imagery presented here, particularly at the end. Excellent take, thanks for entering and good luck