From sunshine long days,
Enjoying summer and its ways.
To cold brisk days,
Where the sun will be gone for days
Loneliness sets in,
And again the sadness begins.
And I wonder why history repeats,
Is this what some call an unlucky streak?
A lonely heart,
A sad soul.
Looking for directions
On which way to go.
What road will be the right one,
Or will it just lead to dark.
As the sadness from my soul,
Seeps into my heart.
Lonely October days,
Drag on, in cold ways.
Please tell me what you think
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Nice, very simple sentence structure but the rhyming pattern really brought it all together. Made me think of being inside and looking out the window and its all cold and rainy and the leaves are blowing down the street. It was a very enjoyable read and I think it was written with a lot of heart.
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its been a while since i heard from you. its nice. How are ya? Thank you for the comment. im sure you know most of my writing comes from the heart. idk what to say. but thanks!
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