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Inner Life

We'll reach for stars
Touching dreams
Beyond this reality

What is life?
Floating down stream
Forever to the sea

Laying quietly
Here
Watching movements out of the corner of my eye

So reach out
With your words
Speak in tongues of fire

Feeling time
Just ebb and flow
As it moves through us

Laying quietly
Here
Watching movements out of the corner of my eye

Feeling your grace
Between the spaces
That surround us all

All that we are
As we speak in hushed tones
Expressing these silent thoughts

And life flows about us
Inside and outside us
With each passing moment as we evolve

Laying quietly
Here
Watching movements out of the corner of my eye

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  • Janice M Pickett
    October 11, 2008
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    So relaxing

    This is a lovely simple poem of contentment. I get it.
    Thank you for entering