Face turning red,
no more happy thoughts
to cross my mind.
What now to hurt my soul,
my heart can take no more.
This broken glass
holds nothing for me.
There is nothing more
for me to see.
A contest entry
- Reflections-What Do You See? by BlackBloodyRose.
450 points, ended October 15, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think? How can I improve? What was your least favorite part? Your favorite?
Comments
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i like it, short, sweet, i like it
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