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...and tonight we shall dance on her grave...

We adhere to what she speaks
Following her every word...but
She doesn't practice what she may preach
Her actions all but desert us

We must wake from her spell
Break the chains that hold us
We must send her back to hell
And leave her in the dust

Not by luck but by chance
The souls that we may save
And tonight we all shall dance
Joyously on her Grave

Author notes

One of the few I wrote that is NOT a song...at least not yet

A contest entry

new song

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    November 23, 2008

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    I can easily see this becoming a song to be honest. It is a good piece for halloween and I enjoyed it. Good one